Aravis's creation.

Subject: Aravis's creation. Fri May 18, 2012 1:06 am

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Aravis's creation. (Picture of character here)

Basics
Name(s):Aravis Shikeigo
Age:15
Appearance description:Aravis has blue hair, with brown eyes. She wears a hat almost everywhere.
Gift description:Poison Generation

Details
Personality:Aravis is shy, but likeds to meet new people
Strengths:love
Weaknesses:animals
Likes:reading and swimming
Dislikes:rejection and being sad
Brief History:Aravis was young when she first used her power. She was being picked on when she released deadly toxins in the air. Before she knew it, the attackers wer dead on the floor in front of her. Years later she got an invite from Beata. She didn't tell her parents about it, and set off.

Subject: Re: Aravis's creation. Fri May 18, 2012 1:13 am

Okay... Uh...

First off, the power is godmodding. If you elaborate and put some limitations on it, then I may or may not approve of it.

Secondly, "poison generation" is not a personality ^^; And I thought Maleia already had the exact same thing.

Thirdly, and probably the most glaring problem is the history... How do you put poison in a man's drink on accident? And how does a 15 year old get to work in a diner?

Subject: Re: Aravis's creation. Fri May 18, 2012 1:16 am

First sorry I forgot to delete Invulnerability. Second I am tired and my eyes are screwing me up.

Subject: Re: Aravis's creation. Sat May 19, 2012 12:54 pm

approved, btw.

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